实例分析雅思高分写作的结构
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实例分析雅思高分写作的结构
雅思写作考试中，文章结构有很多种，而不同的文章结构也针对不同的雅思写作话题类型，那么各类型的雅思写作话题更适合怎样的文章结构呢?今天给大家讲解雅思写作中常见的作文结构。
纵观历年考试中，雅思写作的题目会经常出现重复的题，今天我们通过《图书馆功能》这个题为例，来具体讲解文章结构。
Maintaining public librariesis a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries’function. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree?
从题型上来讲，这是个非常典型的“同意不同意”观点辩驳类型的题目。在分析这个题目的时候大家应该注意分析其题眼所在。
整个题目是一个因果关系的命题，即“因为电脑科技可以替代公共图书馆的功能，所以花钱维护公共图书馆是一种浪费钱的举动”。考生需要论证自己同意或者不同这个命题。
在仔细分析后我们不难发现这个命题有两条主线：
1. 因果关系是否成立;
2. 电脑科技是否能够取代公共图书馆。
一篇好的文章应该该将上述两条主线都要提到，这样子才能保证有较高的文章解析程度。在分析好题目之后现在我们就开始谋篇布局。
换言之就是这篇文章我们考虑要写几段，每一段具体写什么内容。
一般来讲常见的雅思作文段落结构有两种，即我们所常见的“五段式”或者“四段式”结构。
所谓的“五段式”是指Introduction和Conclusion各写一段，然后文章主体部分用三个理由段落来论证自己观点。
所谓的“四段式”就是指主体段落只用两个理由段落来论证。
两种分段方法都有其优势所在：
“五段式”结构层次感强，作者表态更鲜明有力。
“四段式”更加容易操作，客观分析论题的正反两面所以容易组织思路。
大家应该学会根据题目和自己的习惯来选择。例如本次考试的文章，下面分别给出其“五段式”和“四段式”的布局结构供大家参考：
四段式：
第一段 引言：描述题目背景，提出观点。
第二段 主线一：不否认电脑科技可以替代公共图书馆的一部分功能。
第三段 主线二：但是公共图书馆作为社会生活的一部分有其不可替代性。
第四段 总结：综上所述，花钱维护公共图书馆不是一种浪费钱的行为。
第一段落：
Maintaining public librariesis not a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries’ function….
第二段落：
We can not deny that computertechnology can replace certain function of library, such as…, because…
第三段落：
But as a necessary part ofour social life, public library can not replace by computer technology in thefollowing aspects….
第四段落：
All in all, maintainingpublic libraries is not a waste of money since computer technology can replacelibraries’ function.
五段式：
第一段 引言：描述题目背景，提出观点。
第二段 主线一：公共图书馆作为社会生活的一部分有其不可替代性之一。
第三段 主线一：公共图书馆作为社会生活的一部分有其不可替代性之二。
第四段 主线二：不否认电脑科技可以取代公共图书馆的一部分功能，但远远不足以完全取代其社会地位。
第五段 总结：综上所述花钱维护公共图书馆不是一种浪费钱的行为。
第一段落：
Maintaining public librariesis not a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries’ function….
第二段落：
Firstly, as a necessary partof our social life, public library can not replace by computer technology,since… (reason 1)
第三段落：
Secondly, as a necessary partof our social life, public library can not replace by computer technology,because… (reason 2)
第四段落：
At last but not least, we cannot deny computer technology can replace certain aspects of public library, butthere is still a long way to go for it to replace public library completely….
第五段落：
In a word, maintaining publiclibraries is not a waste of money since computer technology can replacelibraries’ function.
从上面的结构中我们可以看到，题目中的两条主线都有详细的文字进行论述，这样一来我们对文章分析题程度就很精细，题目中所提到的各种要求我们都分析到了，这样我们就能在这一项上拿到一个较高的分数，也就是我们通常所说的评分标准第一项(Task Response)。而如果文章一直在论证电脑科技能否取代图书馆的话就会有些偏题，分数相对也会受到一定的影响。
以上就是实例分析雅思高分写作的结构的全部内容，大家可以看出雅思写作的每一段是一个典型的总分总的结构，整体的文章构成也是总分总的结构。这个结构是英语写作中的典型结构。文中对于这个题目，进行了细致的写作前的写作思路讲解和大纲的罗列，同学们也可以参照这种方法在写作之前先想清楚要写什么，怎么写后再动笔开始写。
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在雅思写作考试时，
中国低分考鸭最常犯的错误是：
习惯一上来就写，边写边思考...
你有木有中枪?
这样做文章结构往往很混乱，东一拳西一脚，考官并不知道你想表达什么。
并且，雅思官方写作评分标准细则中连贯性评分项已明确指出：
考生应该有技巧性地、恰当地划分文章段落结构
所以在写作前，必须构思文章结构，它有助于你组织以及更加集中地表达观点，从而写得又快又切题，这也是预防丢分的一大法宝。
那么究竟应该如何组织文章呢?
在这里，推荐大家
采取“四段法”来架构文章。
“四段法”是指将文章划分为4段来写：
1.Introduction→answer the question in a general way
开头介绍段：阐述话题，大体上回答题目中所要求的内容。
2.Body1→details/examples
主体段1：以细节和具体例子来阐述观点
3.Body2→details/examples
主体段2：以细节和具体例子来阐述观点
4.Conclusion→summarize your ideas
结尾段：总结所陈述的观点
“四段法”并不是唯一的写作结构，但却是最简单有效的，因为它可以应对雅思Task2所有的问题类型。
雅思大作文常见的问题类型有下面4种：
1.Opinion Question 观点型
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
一般此类问题会针对某个话题提出观点或论断，然后问你是否赞同，需要你选择支持的观点，并解释为什么支持这个观点。
2.Discussion Question 讨论型
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
此问题是让考生们自由列观点，需要你先把题目中的给出的两种相反的观点分别进行讨论和给出原因，最后给出自己的观点，或在讨论的过程中就给出自己的看法。
3.Problem—solving 解决问题型
Explain this problem and suggest some solutions.
此类问题通常先阐述一个比较棘手or烦人的现象(比如环保问题啦低头族问题啦)， 然后让你去讨论并且解决这个问题。
4.Two-part 混合型
这类问题一般会给出一个观点，然后针对观点提出两个相关问题让你去回答。
其中观点型和讨论型是雅思考试中最高频的问题类型。
对于这四种类型的作文题目，
你知道怎么下手么?
下面一一解析
如何运用“四段法”来收服这“四大金刚”!
1
Opinion Question Structure
观点型问题结构
Example Question
As well as making money,businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
构思流程：
1.Introduction
Introduce the topic.Then,give your opinion.
在这部分第一个句子先介绍话题，然后再给出自己的总体观点。大家可以表达不同的观点，同意、不同意或者给出一个平衡中立的观点，同意其中的一部分观点。
2.Body Paragraph 1
Discuss your opinion(first theme)
3.Body Paragraph 2
Discuss your opinion(Second theme)
theme指的是针对一种观点你的一些想法的集合统称为theme;
4.Conclusion
Re-paraphrase the topic and give your opinion with a couple of extra details from your body paragraphs.No new details.
重新阐述或总结一下话题，并再次通过主体段中的一些细节重申观点。但不要增加新的细节信息，这样会使观点更加离散化。
对于以上问题，你可以这样总结：
In conclusion,I believe that businesses have a strong responsibility to society in addition to making profits,because......(列出主体段中的一些原因即可)
注：总结段没有必要太长，简短完整即可，对于意见型问题，你既可以表示同意或不同意，也可以表达中立的观点。
2
Discussion Question Structure
讨论型问题结构
Example Question:
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like(SideA).Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future,such as those related to science and technology(SideB).
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
构思流程：
我们现将两种观点标注出来，然后按照“四段法”一一填充内容。
1.Introduction
Introduce the topic(both sides).Then,give your opinion.
一开始先介绍双方观点并进行讨论，最后再给出自己的观点。
在开头段表达个人观点，可以很明确地回应题目指示。另外一个作用就是“江湖救急”，如果在写结尾段时时间不够了，就可以快速地写一个简单的结论，因为开头已经给出了明确的观点。
2.Body Paragraph 1
Discuss one side(opposite side to your opinion)
讨论与你的观点相对立的那一方;
3.Body Paragraph 2
Discuss the other side(same side as your opinion)
讨论和你观点一致的那一方;
这样“先抑后扬”的讨论，会强有力地支撑你的结论，先分析对立方观点优劣势，然后再着重强调自己赞同的这一方为什么行得通，从而更有信服力。
4.Conclusion
Re-paraphrase the topic and give your opinion with a couple of extra details from your body paragraphs.No new details.
同上，还是要总结一下话题，并选取主体段中的重要信息重申观点。不要补充新观点，突出强调主要观点即可。
3
Problem Solving Question Structure
问题解决型结构
Example Question:
The number of plants and animals is declining.Explain this problem and suggest some solutions.
构思流程：
1.Introduction
Introduce the topic.Suggest that this problem can be solved.
总结一下出现的问题，并表明这个问题可以解决，你不需要给出具体的解决方案，只需要指出有一些解决办法，或者你可以笼统地提一下你建议的解决办法。
如： This problem can be solved by the following ways.
This problem can be solved by the joint efforts of the government and civil organizations.
2.Body Paragraph 1
Explain the problem.Give examples.描述一下当前问题及产生的原因，并给出具体的例子。
3.Body Paragraph 2
Suggest some solutions. Explain causes and effects.
提出解决方案并解释为什么要这么做，这么做了会有什么影响和结果。
4.Conclusion
Summarize the problem and your solution with a few specific details from the body paragraphs. No new details.
总结一下问题并根据主体段中的具体信息阐述一下解决方案，不要增加新的信息。
注：对于解决问题型题目，它不要求你的观点有多新颖，考官不会评判你的观点的质量，他们考察的是你是否给出具体的例子、清晰的原因和事实来支持你的观点。你不需要是奇思妙想的天才，哪怕你的观点并无实际用处，但只要自圆其说就可以。
4
Two Part Question Structure
混合型问题结构
Example Question:
Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
构思流程：
1.Introduction
Introduce the topic.Then,give overall answers to both questions.
介绍话题并大概回答一下两个问题。
2.Body Paragraph 1
Discuss your answer to the first question.
针对第一个问题的回答展开讨论。
3.Body Paragraph 2
Discuss your answer to the second question.
针对第二个问题的回答展开讨论。
4.Conclusion
Re-paraphrase the topic and summarise your answers to each question with a couple of details from the body paragraphs. No new details.
再次阐述话题并根据以上两个主体段的信息总结两个回答，不要增加新的信息。
注：这类话题比较罕见，但同学们也要有所准备。
除了要搞定文章架构外，
我们还需要掌握写作提分必杀技—复杂句，
一提起复杂句，
很多小伙伴都感到苦大仇深，
其实复杂句被妖魔化了，
真正的复杂句一点都不复杂，
它就是简单句的叠加组合升级!
举个栗子，很多中国考生会这么写:
Wider roadscan solve traffic congestion.Wider roadsallow traffic to move more easily.
但只要稍微一改动，小短句就能摇身一变成为“精品复合句”。
我们来具体分析一下：
1.根据英语的习惯表达，我们在句首可以增加动名词，这样的语法结构会大大提分。
第一句改成：
Building wider roadscan solve traffic congestion.
2.从句子意思层面来分析，第一个句子属于解决方案，第二个句子具体解释解决办法的可行性，所以根据两个句子间的关系，可以添加连词because将两个句子连接起来;
Building wider roads can solve traffic congestion，because wider roads allow traffic to move more easily.
3.接下来我们注意到,句子中有重复的主语wider roads,而动名词结构做主语，形式主语要用it替代，谓语动词用单数，所以这个句子就变成了：
Building wider roadscan solve traffic congestion，becauseit allowstraffic to move more easily.
所以大家可以看到：
只需要三步就能让一个简单句改头换面!
第一步：先思考英语的习惯表达，看自己的句子符不符合英语语言习惯;
第二步：分析句子间关系，利用连词、关系代词等衔接手段将句子连接起来。
第三步：检查句子内部的语法结构是否正确清晰。
虽然复杂句是雅思写作中的高分利器，
然而我们并不需要“长篇大论”，
考生需要有节奏的使用复杂句!
为什么中国学生雅思写作的分数一直提不上去?
雅思写作是一项英语输出类考试，一直是中国学生的薄弱点并且提分较慢，这与中国学生长期的英语学习习惯有关。
中国学生更多地把雅思当做一场考试来学习，而忽视了自身真正英语能力的提升，而口语与写作部分对考生的英语能力要求相对较高。
所以希望各位亲学生们除了掌握必备的考试技巧外，更多地注重积累素材和词汇，多加练习和交流，注重自身英语能力的提升。
以上就是雅思写作6分基本结构讲解的全部内容，同学们掌握了这种基本的写作结构吗?与其说他是雅思写作得到6分这个分数的基本结构，不如说是在英语中写立论文的时候的基本写作结构，因此，不仅是雅思，在考生们考完雅思去国外留学时，也会在学校的作业等当中发现雅思写作的文体和结构能够用到很多地方的。
雅思大作文范文：广告对人们日常生活影响积极还是消极
Today advertising can be seen everywhere in daily life. It has influenced what people think is important and sometimes has negative effects on people’s life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文：
Nowadays we cannot go anywhere without seeing advertisements of one kind or another. The penetration of advertising into our life has gone so far that sometimes we even feel amazed by its ubiquity. Advertising is, of course, very useful, informing us about what to buy, where to buy and how to buy, but it also has negative effects, especially bytransforming what we regard as important in our life.
Surrounded by advertisements, we can easily be led to a belief that our life is all about buying things. This widespread consumerism can persuade us into buying many things we do not really need on the one hand, and make us less content with what we have on the other, andcrave hopelessly for those unattainable commodities. I still remember a few days ago when walking in front of a supermarket, I saw how a little girl, with her eyes glued to an advertising board, pestered her mother for the expensive toy on it that her mother apparently could not afford. Advertising, then, while providing us with useful commodities information, also creates the unwanted desire at our heart and makes us unhappy.
Meanwhile, lured by the promises of advertising, some people may choose to commit crimes, which then causes a lot of social problems. A student, for instance, may rob his classmate of an iPhone 8, for he has been told by advertising that iPhone 8 is superior to its previous versions. Likewise, an official may take bribery to buy an expensive house by the lake because the advertising says the luxury of living there is superb.
Seen in this light, advertising can affect our way of thinking about life and we, therefore, should be cautious about its negative influences while enjoying the benefits it brings us.
雅思大作文范文：青少年比例上升
Figures show that in some countries, there is an ever-increasing proportion of population aged 15 or younger. What do you think are the current and future effects on those countries?
范文：
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, the population of teenagers is on the rise in some countries which might have both positive and negative effects on the progress of a nation. Here, I would like to account for current and upcoming consequences of this phenomenon.
Multifarious positive effects can be put down behind this happening. First and foremost, youthful generation plays a phenomenal role to flourish the progress of a nation. For example, majority of young people are expected to learn professional skills related to science, engineering, medical, technology, sports and so on. As a result, a country will be enriched with a massive number of prodigious talented people who could contribute remarkably at jobs to ensure the development of their nation. Besides this, advancement strides only in the presence of youngsters. To be specific, young blood is energetic, agile, creative and adaptive who welcome new changes, adjust nicely and can introduce innovative ideas for betterment of living standard. Hence, a nation is supposed to be more advanced than others.
Moreover, youngsters are well educated, advanced and conscious about healthy living standard. Thence, they could be made willing to participate in social welfare activities such as planting more trees, promoting cleanliness, saving wild life, using biodegradable materials so on to evolve pleasant ecological conditions and superior lifestyle. On the contrary, it has thorny side too.
To begin with, in many thriving regions, employment sources are less due to deprivation of industries and other commercial sectors. Therefore, increasingly number of young people is leading to lack of job opportunities in such areas. Furthermore, the cultural heritage of a nation may lose its significance. To be specific, unlike other age groups, youthful generation has tendency to develop their own ways of living and attitudes rather than following traditional values. Thus, individuality of a culture will be at the low ebb. All of above, generation gap will spread its roots on account of imbalanced ratio of different age groups. Hence, misunderstandings and disputes might be the order of the day between young and late adulthood.
To recapitulate, elevation in the number youngsters may lead to some hardships. However, I still believe positive outcomes will exceed negative results.
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