关于托福写作常见的病句整理

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关于托福写作常见的病句整理

1. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。

改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。

2.We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。

改进： We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。

3. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。

改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization。

4. For example， you work in a big factory。

改进： Suppose you work in a big factory。

5.He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。

改进： He will get a higher salary，thus improving his life。

6. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。

改进： Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。

7. Their brain is still very young。

改进： They are still immature。

8. Though it is not the best job，it afford to his life。

改进： Though it is not the best job，a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。

9. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。

改进： They cannot tell right from wrong。

10. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。

改进： It will help children learn to make good use of time。 

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation，they want further development。

改进： Since people are never satisfied with their status，they want further development。

12. They like an active life but not a peaceful life。

改进： They like an active life rather than a peaceful one。

13. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money。

改进： The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。

定语名词的复数解析

名词作定语一般用单数，但也有以下例外。

1) 用复数作定语。

如：sports meeting 运动会

students reading-room 学生阅览室

talks table 谈判桌

the foreign languages department 外语系

2) man， woman， gentleman等作定语时，其单复数以所修饰的名词的单复数而定。

如：men workers　　women teachers

gentlemen officials

3) 有些原有s结尾的名词，作定语时，s保留。

如：goods train (货车)

arms produce　武器生产

customs papers 海关文件

clothes brush衣刷

4) 数词+名词作定语时，这个名词一般保留单数形式。

如：two-dozen eggs　两打/(二十四个鸡蛋)

a ten-mile walk 十里路

two-hundred trees 两百棵树

a five-year plan.　一个五年计划

个别的有用复数作定语的，如： a seven-years child

不可数名词量的表示

1)物质名词

a. 当物质名词转化为个体名词时。

比较：

Cake is a kind of food.　蛋糕是一种食物。 (不可数)

These cakes are sweet.　这些蛋糕很好吃。 (可数)

b. 当物质名词表示该物质的种类时，名词可数。

This factory produces steel.　(不可数)

We need various steels.　(可数)

c. 当物质名词表示份数时，可数。

Our country is famous for tea.

我国因茶叶而闻名。

Two teas， please.

请来两杯茶。

2) 抽象名词有时也可数

four freedoms 四大自由

the four modernizations四个现代化

物质名词和抽象名词可以借助单位词表一定的数量。

如：

a glass of water 一杯水

a piece of advice　一条建议

情态动词的语法特征

1) 情态动词不能表示正在发生或已经发生的事情，只表示期待或估计某事的发生。

2) 情态动词除ought 和have 外，后面只能接不带to 的不定式。

3) 情态动词没有人称，数的变化，即情态动词第三人称单数不加-s.

4) 情态动词没有非谓语形式，即没有不定式，分词，等形式。

比较may和might

1) 表示允许或请求;表示没有把握的推测;may 放在句首，表示祝愿。例如：

May God bless you! 愿上帝保佑你!

He might be at home. 他可能在家。

注意：might 表示推测时，不表示时态，只是可能性比may 小。

2) 成语：may/might as well，后面接不带to 的不定式，意为"不妨".例如：

If that is the case， we may as well try.如果情况确实如此，我们不妨试一试。

典型例题

Peter ___come with us tonight， but he isn't very sure yet.

A. must　B. may　C. can　D. will

答案B. 表可能性只能用may.此句意可从后半句推出。