新手练笔GRE写作需注意这5种易错扣分问题

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【备考提升】新手练笔GRE写作需注意这5种易错扣分问题

GRE作文丢分点：逻辑问题

大体上来说，考生们的逻辑问题是最多的。逻辑问题有三种，通篇逻辑，段落之间，段落之中。

其实这可能和我们高中初中的英语教育有关系，大家都很喜欢一条一条摆原因。Firstly， secondly...然后后面至于这个ly后面是什么就不管了，一顿胡扯。也不管这段落与段落之间的衔接是否自然，反正都有什么ly给打头阵。

事实上，中西方的思维总是存在差异，很多时候看管老师们都不懂考生在说什么。考官很困惑，这个例子和这个有关系吗?为什么前面在说A，后面突然B了?

GRE作文丢分点：结构混乱

写GRE作文要记住一点，文章是一个整体，所以开篇结尾和中部内容都是应该有关联的。也就是说，在开头提到的，文中应该有展开，同时在结尾有总结。中文作文里也要求行文流畅，所以文章至少要做到逻辑通顺。

GRE作文丢分点：立场模糊

很多同学都很喜欢写中立观点“A不错，但不够好”，这虽然看起来很客观，但实际上这种新GRE写作对逻辑的要求非常高，要怎样去组织语言，组织相应的论据论点，非常考验人。

有同学想说A事件要瑕疵互见，但是写着写着就乱七八糟，东一块西一块，不知道在讲点什么了。更有厉害的索性冗长的2000来词，讲了个空话。所以建议刚上手的同学，还是选择一边倒，站定脚跟不放松。即便是真的要写中立观点，实际上也都在A和B之间有所偏好。

GRE作文丢分点：胡乱举例

现在很多老师和教材都会要求练写作的时候先写提纲。于是考生们就只写一个观点，然后后面的例子乱用，或者根本没有弄清楚什么是例子。事实上，这种展开，可以是实例，也可以是虚拟的假设。实例中往往分自己的经验和他人的经验。那么怎样的例子有说服力呢?

一般来说是：名人名事(知名度大)> 众人众事(样本大)>自己经历(体会深)>他人经历。假设往往不够有说服力，因为很难涉及到每一个变量。但是假设在有的时候可以行得通，就是在很难说清楚步骤和因果关系的时候，用一个假设场景来推导会让文章变得浅显易懂。

所以建议，在刚开始上手写GRE作文的时候，先不要给自己30分钟的压力，先列出提纲(10分钟)，再用30分钟去写，看能写多少。

GRE作文丢分点：观点跑题

记住你的举例一定要死死扣住你的新GRE作文观点，不要是和观点打擦边球的。

GRE考试中例子一定要从论点出发，再回到论点。不要将你的论点发散，后果很可能就是越写越跑题。所以每次写好一篇文章，都看看，论据里的key words是不是和论点里的key words一样，论点里的key words又是不是和题目里的key words一样。你的key words 可以比大题里的key words更加narrow，但是千万不要更加广泛。

有关GRE考试写作的易丢分点就为大家介绍到这里，希望各位考生在复习时特别注意这些问题，认真对待GRE写作。

GRE作文典型句摘录

是非问题句子:

1. Whereas other societies look to the past for guidance, we cast our nets forward.

2. It is the belief in a brighter future that gives us optimism.

3. The job of the parents is to give the children every opportunity while they are growing up and then get out of their way.

4. When half the population goes to college, one cannot expect the colleges to maintain the same standards as in countries where only the elite attend.

5. Just as not every Japanese is hardworking and deferential to superiors,not every Chinese is devoted to family, not every American is ambitious or patriotic—or even unsophisticated.

6. No one could seriously think that anyone who grows up poor, lives in a bad neighborhood, and attends an inferior school has an opportunity equal to that of someone more favored.

7. Current wisdom says that if you want a successful product, you need first to perform detailed market analysis, making sure that there are plenty of people who need the new product and that you entry into the market will be able to gain a significant share of that market.

8. The evidence suggests that, on balance, people today tend to concern themselves with only practical matters that are related to their life.

9. At first glance, it would seem that increased bureaucracy creates obstacles between the citizens and those who govern, thereby separating the two groups. Closer examination reveals, however, that in many ways government bureaucracy actually bridges the gap, and that new technologies now allow for ways around the gap.

10. There is no doubt that hard work contributes to success, yet a person can work awfully hard and still achieve very little.

逻辑问题句子:

1. The mere fact that ticket sales in recent years for screenplay-based movies have exceeded those for book-based movies is insufficient evidence to conclude that writing screenplays now provides greater financial opportunity for writers.

2. The argument fails to rule out the possibility that a writer engages in both types of writing as well as other types.

3. The argument simply equates success with movie ticket sales, which is unwarranted.

4. Moreover, the author provides no evidence that the realism of color photography is the reason for its predominance.

5. This assumption presents a false dilemma, since the two media are not necessarily mutually exclusive alternatives.

6. The argument ignores the factors—such as initiative, creativity, technical skills, and business judgment—that may be more important than the choice of medium in determining success in photography.

7. While this may be true in some cases, it is equally possible that only companies with products that are already best-sellers can afford the higher ad rates that popular shows demand.

8. The author’s conclusion that switching to incineration would be more salutary for public health would be seriously undermined.

9. Consequently, unless the author can demonstrate that the city will incur expenses that are not covered by the increased revenues from these projects, the author’s concern about these issues is unfounded.

10. The author’s proposal is inconsistent with the author’s conclusion about the consequences of adopting an ethics code.

GRE考试范文：名人观点

When famous people give their opinions， many people listen. Should we pay attention to those remarks?

When Tom Cruise once appeared in a TV program， he was too excited so he jumped up and down the couch. Later “jump the couch” was adopted in the American dictionary for slang. This is a bit exaggerating， but it definitely reflects the fact that when famous people give their opinions， many people listen. But， should we pay attention to these remarks or actions?

Firstly， famous people are “famous”， for they have one or few aspects that exceed common people. Like Albert Einstein once said， “I think and think for months， for years， ninety-nine times the conclusion false， but the hundredth time I am right.” As a brilliant scientist， he speaks of the right attitudes towards science and inspires countless people to fight for the truth. Hollywood actors or actresses， they may talk about their dressing styles or skin cares on magazine. These are all advice that we might as well take， for real life is not just serious academic things but also the satisfaction of living.

But the point is that， celebrities are not perfect role models for the public. Once I heard a story about Einstein， saying that he nearly got into the water when he once harassed a young lady and got refused when they were in a boat in a park. Is Einstein evil somehow? No! He's just being human. Then is it wrong to harass ladies? Yes. But all humans make mistakes. Celebrities are experts in certain areas but not all. In some other fields， they should even learn from us.

Generally， there are two extremes when talking about celebrities： the public are either too critical or too superstitious. Objectively， both of the attitudes are unnecessary. As a Chinese saying which generalizes this situation the best goes： to take in the good， while to get rid of the bad.

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