托福写作经常＂跑题＂该怎么办?

　　或给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点，并给出理由(Some people like different friends. Other likes similar friends. Compare the advantages of these two kinds of friends. Which kind of friend do you prefer? Explain why.)

　　185个topics从内容上可分为：

　　学习类：(如自学还是跟老师学，学广还是学精)

　　工作类：(如在大公司还是小公司)

　　生活类：(如食品烹饪便捷是否提高生活质量，如喜欢在家里吃饭还是在餐厅吃饭)

　　电视电影类：(如电视电影疏远了家人的情感，你是否同意)

　　消费类：(如花在娱乐上，还是事业上)

　　环境类：(如政府投入环保的力度是否应该大于投入经济发展的力度)

　　古老建筑类：(如是否应该保留老建筑)

　　成功类：(如成功的衡量标准是金钱和荣耀，你的看法如何)

　　性格类：(如聪明的朋友比幽默的朋友重要，你是否同意)

　　2.形成自己的答案资源库

　　熟悉了写作题目之后，就要准备自己的答案资源库了。自己的资源库要包括：同一类题目的通用观点，有针对性的例证(不一定都要背名人典故，可以从自身取材，自给自足)。这些内容都是要自己去深思，需要有人点拨，才能形成一个清晰的构架和写作流程的。我的习惯就是羊毛出在羊身上，来源于彼，还原于彼。

　　3.线性思维，总——分——总

　　在新托福独立写作中，用这总分总种思维最容易获得高分，所以你要在平时的练习中一定要注意写作的结构。托福作文应该写成三个层次，也就是我们确立了中心思想后应该找到三条理由来支持。托福作文五段论：第一段为中心思想段;二、三、四段为支持段落;最后一段为总结段落。其实这个东西并不是绝对的，有自己的思想内容来决定，因此八股文的形式还是要隐晦些。

　　4.模仿几个拽句子

　　拽句子不用很多，点缀其中，添彩即可。模仿的句子来源，可以是阅读中的复杂句式，先分析长句子的语义功能：它在文章中起了什么作用，是总结，是过渡，是举例，还是因果?那么我在用到总结的语句时，是不是能偷天换日地用上这样的句式?用上几次之后，这些句子就会变得简单熟悉了。

　　托福独立写作素材整理——关于健康

　　在托福写作的备考过程中，拥有更多的例子运用也将会让你的写作更加充实和完美。下面我们就为大家带来科技范畴的托福写作例子，希望大家能在自己的托福写作中加之以融汇贯通，为自己的托福备考带来更好的帮助。

　　运动

　　In contemporary society, a multitude of people are increasingly aware of the fundamentality of maintaining health, so as to enjoying better life quality and longevity. In order to possess a healthy body, not only need we keep a nutritious diet and adequate sleep, it is crucial for individuals to form the habit of exercising regularly, as sports and health are intrinsically connected. Doing sports will greatly increase people's metabolism, and strengthen our physique. Sports also help to refresh people's mind from brainwork all day and night, and even more surprisingly, exercising can stimulate people's brains to work more actively and creatively. Overall, sports are not the business of a small group of athletes, but a life-long pursuit that every person should bear in mind and endeavor to put it into practice. Not only do sports benefit individuals, the improvement of the nation's health would be a huge contribution to our country's development.

　　We might also cite an allegorical story. It is said that an individual’s life is accompanied with five balls, which are lover, family, career, health and friend. Lover, family, career and friends are all rubber balls, consequently, it could bound back when falling to ground. On the contrast, health is the unique glass ball, which is fragile enough to be ruined with a single drop.

　　The increasingly sedentary lifestyle will engender a higher incidence of ailments. More overweight people means more patients suffering from cardiovascular diseases such as vein hardening, diabetes and hypertension.

　　便利(节省时间\时间灵活\交通\休闲\健身\娱乐\吃喝\购物)

　　People are concerned about the efficiency with the accelerating tempo of life. The more the better. The fast the better. In this regard, XX takes the top priority. For instance, whenever people click on a search engine and key in a few words into the search box, they will get huge amounts of information. The amazing thing is, all the searching is done in a few seconds, which spares people a great deal of time to enjoy the entertainment such as body-building, watching opera or a movie in their leisure time.

　　其他参考：

　　Telecommuting(在家办公) can spare workers the everyday chore of traveling back and forth to work.

　　Global cultural homogeneity has immensely enriched the lives of the denizens in developing countries. For instance, now Holly wood blockbusters typically get their first screening in China within a couple of days after their American premiere, and youths in China can download singles topping billboard charts from the Internet without having to scout around in a CD store. Enhanced TV connectivity affords Chinese viewers chances to see primetime American TV shows. This ease of access to a multitude of foreign amusements has really brightened up the lives of many.

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