不要让自己的托福写作过于刻板

不要让自己的托福写作过于刻板

　　对于整篇文章并不是在苛求每一处的漏洞和缺点，评审官的整个评审过程是针对于全文的优点亮点而展开的。那么，我们究竟该怎样发挥自己托福写作能力呢?下面是学习啦小编给大家带来的不要让自己的托福写作过于刻板，供大家参考!

　　不要让自己的托福写作过于刻板

　　托福独立写作对于学生有着这样的要求，30分钟内完成一篇字数在300字左右的议论文。但是，对于阅卷者来说，所真正遵循的原则却是：“Readers should focus on what the examinee does well。”

　　对于初入托福写作练习的同学来说，大部分同学都是会比较在意自己的文章的字数发挥。总是会认为，字数多了少了都会影响到最后的评分。其实，若想得到高分，考生最好能将文章写到300字以上，虽然有些文章字数不足但仍可得到满分，但是毕竟这种情况比较罕见。但是，从这个文章的布局和描述的角度考虑，也是只有300-350字左右，才能充分而清晰的让自己把内容表达明确。

　　从考虑字数的问题一路延续，很多学生又会考虑到托福写作的模板化、模式化。文章的发展指的是运用例子，细节和理由来支持你在文章中所阐述的观点。阅卷者不希望看到考生为了凑字数而过多使用一些 “模式化”的单词或句子来发展文章，也不愿意看到考生过多抄袭或者沿用题目中的句子。如果考生的文章是组织有序的，那么阅卷者从头看到尾也不会感到糊涂。但是在此提醒考生，文章结构的有序，并不是单纯地使用了诸如 first，second之类的连词就可以达成。

　　托福写作15个热门话题构思[1-8]：

　　1、 同意上大学好

　　(1)为未来工作进行准备

　　(2)交更多的朋友，学习他们的思维方式

　　(3)系统的学习知识

　　I think going to the college is the better policy.

　　First， preparing for you future career by learning the basic knowledge will increase your competitive power. The college is the best place where can supply you with the background knowledge of your future career.

　　Second， you can make more friends and learn the way of their thinking. You will be influenced by intellectual companions. You can also build up your social network in your college and make your friends be your resources.

　　Last， you can benefit from going to the college by learning the knowledge in a systematic way which is more efficient.

　　2、同意父母是最好的老师

　　(1)父母从小就和我们在一起，给我们很多的知识

　　(2)父母和我们最为亲密，在任何时候，都会毫无保留地给我们知识

　　(3)父母最了解我们，所以他们给我们的建议和意见都是最有针对性的

　　I totally agree with that parents are the best teacher.

　　First， they raised us up thus spending the most time with us. During the process， they teach us every tiny things in daily life.

　　Second， they are most intimate to us and generous to give us the knowledge and lessons whenever， whatever， wherever we need.

　　Last， they are the people who know us best， the suggestions and advices they give can result in the solutions we need based on the specific situation of our own.

　　3、食品容易保存将改变人们的生活习惯

　　(1)食品容易准备，节省了大量的时间，使人们可以做其他事情

　　(2)食品容易准备，为人们提供了更多的花样。

　　(3)食品容易准备，为人们的健康带来了很多好处

　　Easy to prepare food saves us amounts of time， (so we can do other things like studying， working or taking care of children. ) It releases people from the time-consuming cook process.

　　Second， the semi-prepared food also offers us with more choices. For instance， if I can only cook Chinese food， the microwave spaghetti sold in the supermarket offer me a new flavor.

　　Last， many people cook in an unhealthy way. We can benefit from the fast-preparing food cos they have been throng rigid quality and healthy tests before launching.

　　4、首先进行比较，然后说书是最重要的来源

　　(1)读书能够节省很多时间

　　(2)书是有系统性的，能够让人以很科学的方式迅速获得知识

　　(3)读书相对比较便宜和容易，而在寻 找经验则比较昂贵和困难

　　Book is more important source.

　　Reading saves you a lot of time while learning certain knowledge. However， learning by experience can be time-consuming. For instance， I want to handle the Microsoft excel. Learning by the teaching material is efficient.

　　Second， books are arranged in a systematic way which allows you to gain the knowledge scientifically and fast.

　　Last， reading is relatively easy and cheap but experiencing can be tough and expensive sometime. Like you want to know America， reading a book is much more economical than going there instead

　　5、先说明优势和劣势，让后说同意建一个工厂

　　(1)工厂能够吸收附近很多人进行就业，对地方的经济有很大的贡献

　　(2)建立工厂能够促使附近其他的商业发展，例如小商店，药店等等，这可以大大方便附近的居民

　　(3)建造工厂，赢利后，就可以向当地政府贡献税收，政府可以利用这些钱改善社区的服务

　　6、一个重要的改变就是改变环境，让它变的更好

　　(1)环境好能改善人的身体健康，很多人因为环境而生病

　　(2)环境好了，吸引更多的游客来旅游

　　(3)环境好能够促进经济发展，吸引更多的商人来投资

　　7、电影和电视影响人的行为

　　(1)电影和电视能够让人们迅速了解整个国家和世界，丰富人的知识，让人们更加乐观

　　(2)电影和电视让人变的懒惰，不愿意和人接触

　　(3)电影和电视让人变的violent

　　8、电影和电视没有破坏朋友和家人的交流

　　(1)电影和电视的很多内容正是朋友和家人聊天的重要内容。没有电影和电视，似乎聊天就缺了很多内容。

　　(2)我们在很多时候是和朋友和家人一起欣赏电影和电视的，这促进了交流

　　(3)电影和电视现在的设计很多是让家人朋友一起参与，这实际上也促进了交流

　　托福写作经典范文——A Rare Fossil Record

　　经典的高分作文在托福备考中都被视为是一件必不可少的备考资料，虽然很多托福过来人都是不主张大家去生搬硬套的背诵一些托福文章。但是，学会累积材料对于托福作文还是会有着很大的帮助。下面小编就会陆续大家带来一些经典满分作文案例，希望大家能从其中收集到更多好词、好句。

　　The preservation of embryos and juveniles is a rate occurrence in the fossil record. The tiny, delicate skeletons are usually scattered by scavengers or destroyed by weathering before they can be fossilized. Ichthyosaurs had a higher chance of being preserved than did terrestrial creatures because, as marine animals, they tended to live in environments less subject to erosion. Still, their fossilization required a suite of factors: a slow rate of decay of soft tissues, little scavenging by other animals, a lack of swift currents and waves to jumble and carry away small bones, and fairly rapid burial. Given these factors, some areas have become a treasury of well-preserved ichthyosaur fossils.

　　The deposits at Holzmaden, Germany, present an interesting case for analysis. The ichthyosaur remains are found in black, bituminous marine shales deposited about 190 million years ago. Over the years, thousands of specimens of marine reptiles, fish and invertebrates have been recovered from these rocks. The quality of preservation is outstanding, but what is even more impressive is the number of ichthyosaur fossils containing preserved embryos. Ichthyosaurs with embryos have been reported from 6 different levels of the shale in a small area around Holzmaden, suggesting that a specific site was used by large numbers of ichthyosaurs repeatedly over time. The embryos are quite advanced in their physical development; their paddles, for example, are already well formed. One specimen is even preserved in the birth canal. In addition, the shale contains the remains of many newborns that are between 20 and 30 inches long.

　　Why are there so many pregnant females and young at Holzmaden when they are so rare elsewhere? The quality of preservation is almost unmatched and quarry operations have been carried out carefully with an awareness of the value of the fossils. But these factors do not account for the interesting question of how there came to be such a concentration of pregnant ichthyosaurs in a particular place very close to their time of giving birth.