考研英语作文：疯狂背诵30篇（29）

考研英语作文：疯狂背诵30篇（29）

Direction 29

Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the picture；
2. point out the serious consequences of this phenomenon；
3. suggest possible solutions.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

审题：

该题谈论了是一个非常令人担忧的现象——许多学生沉迷于网络游戏和网上聊天。结构非常清晰，分为三个部分——描述图画，说明危害，提出解决办法。我们可按照提纲来构建我们的文章，将文章分成三段来写。

Sample:

In the net bar, those who are present are obviously all school children. Different are the things they are doing on computers—some are playing games and some are chatting online; but the same are the expressions they wear before the computers—attentive and addicted. It seems that they are so absorbed in the unreal world that they may not notice anything around them in the real world.

As is known to all, the addiction to net games and chat can do great harm to children. First of all, it will affect their study by taking up a lot of time and energy. Secondly, radiation from computers will harm their health, especially their eyes. In addition, their indulging in the unreal world will have negative influence on their communication with people in the real world, and thus will hamper the development of their personality and mental health.

From my point of view, in order to solve this problem, the primary responsibility falls on parents, who are supposed to have more significant influence on the growth of children. By improving mutual communication, they can establish a better relationship with the children, make them feel they are cared and understood, and reasonably direct their interests. Next come teachers and schools, who, undoubtedly, play an important role in children’s education. Besides teaching knowledge in class, they should help children develop various interests to fill their afterclass time, such as sports and scientific invention. In my belief, the problem of children’s addiction in net games and chat can be solved through efficient communication and proper guidance.

点评：

文章的第一段是描述图画。共分三句话，第一句话说网吧里都是学生。第二句采用对比法，说不同的是有的打游戏，有的上网聊天，可相同的是都那样专注。第三句采用结果状语从句，充分描述了他们此时的状态。
第二段首句是段落的主题句。而后分三个方面来谈，第一点是影响学习；第二点是有害健康；第三点是对个人成长极为不利。
第三段分两个方面来说，即家长和教师，结构极为清晰。最后一句话是结论，是对前面两点（共四句话）的总结。

心得：

该文章是典型的“现象——后果——办法”模式的文章，通过分析图画和文章，我们可以迅速确定文章的结构和发展，这是非常重要的。