雅思写作空洞问题怎么破
雅思写作空洞问题怎么破?增加论证是关键，一起来看看吧，小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。
雅思写作空洞问题怎么破?增加论证是关键
雅思写作空洞问题怎么破?增加论证是关键为你带来对于雅思写作的常见问题之一空洞的破题方法——增加论证和解释内容的做法讲解。雅思大作文的话题通常涉及 社会经济等较宏观话题，对于中国考生，语言关当然是阻碍写作的一个重要因素，除了这一个，由于平时很少思考这类问题，根本不知道要写什么或者只能写出流水帐这样的问题也屡见不鲜。今天，我们就来看看空洞问题的解决办法。
雅思大作文考的是议论文，即考查考生是否能够在相对较短的时间内搜集论据，具体地论证自己的观点。另外，大作文的话题范围也很广，政府社会、工作、经济、科技、教育等话题都会考到。但对于长期接触国内英语学习的学生来说，在写作时仍然会摸不着头脑，无处下笔。因为中国考生很少考虑这方面的问题，学校老师也很少鼓励对这些社会话题进行讨论，造成考生想问题往往只能按照固定模式，因而论证非常空洞、缺乏说服力。
中国考生在应对雅思作文时喜欢通过讲道理来说明问题，但话题中并不是所有题目和内容都可以通过道理来说服他人的，比如关于“anti-social behavior”， 属于道德范畴的话题，是很难用道理来讲清楚的。所以，建议考生在备考时需要加强论据论证的能力，使其能够很好地支持自己的观点。
那么，应该如何对大作文进行有力的论证呢?最常用的方式就是解释和论证，几乎在每一篇雅思大作文中，都可以看见这两种论证方法的身影。
如下面关于“work at home or study at home”的一段论证：
IBM, one of the business giants, has saved nearly 70 million US dollars in its northeastern region by promoting telecommuting, which has been a driving force to other enterprises to convert their normal working staff into telecommuters. Companies in Japan are one of them and plan to launch the scheme in 2009, which, in turn, spiritually wins more supports from the existing employees, and attracts new hires.
作为商业巨头之一的IBM公司，通过推广远程办公，在东北地区节省了近7000万美元，这也成为其他企业将普通员工转变为远程工作者的动力。日本的公司就是其中之一，他们计划在2009年推出该计划，从而在精神上从现有员工那里赢得更多的支持，并吸引新员工。
这段话中的2个例子(商业巨头IBM和日本的企业计划)都较好地完成了“若员工选择在家上班，会对公司带来积极的作用”这一证明。
此外，提醒考生们需要注意的是，雅思大作文明确指出“give reasons or examples from your own experience”， 这里的“your own experience”和“your personal experience”是完全不同的概念。前者是指通过个人的学习和总结而获得的经验，后者是指个人经历或周围某个个体的故事。如谈到“working hard produces better results”， “your own experience”的例子一定是“some 3-year-high school students usually stay up late to review lessons and prepare for next day classes”， 而“your personal experience”的例子则应该是“my roommate, Tony has always been working hard on studies and staying up late every night”， 不难看出两者的区别。故雅思大作文是不能使用个人案例的论据的，这一点与新托福(微博)的写作也是不同的。
另外，数据论证也是一个重要的方法，同时也是国外文章中非常常见的。使用这种方式，需要注意两点：数据和数据的来源。数据的真实性不重要，但至少要看上去是“真实的”。如：A survey by the latest Ministry of Labour’s opinion poll shows that more companies would like to open their doors to disabled people, as long as they can access to modern technology, and the rate has been increasing every year by 5% since 2003.
使用数据论证，提醒考生们不要刻意将数据夸张，这样反而会降低数据的真实可靠性。常见的句型有“a survey by….shows that / a research by….finds out that / a study by….suggests that / Statistics by….conclude that…”省略号的部分是需要根据文章的内容来填写的数据来源出处或机构。常用的机构包括：国外大学、学院、报纸、杂志、电视台、之声、网站、研究机构、民意调查等。我们按顺序给大家做一个示范：the University of Sussex, Business College of several European countries, the USATODAY, state media CNN, BBC Talking Point, Childwise.com, American Institute for Research, Harris Interactive Poll等，考生可按照自己的情况，来准备几个备选方案以供使用。
第三个常见的论证方法要数对比论证了。对比论证可以是一个东西或行为的正反面对比，也可以是一种现象的时间前后的论证。如下面关于“是否moving to regional areas”的例子：
Staffs used to complain about the crowded offices shared with climbing number of colleagues, the acute shortage of parking lots, the expensive luncheon, and the tedious civic landscape filled up with cement, steel rods and ceramic tiles. Now, companies can move to larger spaces, like industrial parks in the regional areas equipped with more personalized facilities, ranging from regular shuttle bus service, areas for relaxation, and more comfortable meeting rooms to hold a larger group of audience。
员工们过去常常抱怨与数量不断攀升的同事共享的拥挤的办公室，停车位严重短缺，昂贵的午餐，以及充斥着水泥、钢筋和瓷砖的乏味的城市景观。现在，公司可以搬到更大的空间，比如区域内的工业园区，配备更个性化的设施，从常规的班车服务，到放松的区域，再到更舒适的会议室，容纳更多的观众。
使用对比论证法可以让段落的内容和字数大幅度提高。上面的这段论述，完全可以只写搬迁到郊外办公后对员工的利益;但是增加了前面“staff used
to…”的内容，能够加倍体现迁移的好处，前后形成一个鲜明的对比，增加文章的说服力。不过，需要特别注意的是，若使用不当，对比论证也可能让文章变得乏味。比如上面的例子中，在“staff used to…”这段文字中讲到了员工的种.种抱怨(停车车位紧缺、午饭昂贵、办公室狭小等)，如果在后面的利益中接着谈搬迁到郊外后停车车位不紧缺、午饭便宜、办公室宽敞等内容的话，大家不难发现这样的论证其实是很无趣的。所以选择对比论证法一方面可以增加论证的内容，另一方面也加大了考生寻找论据的难度，也就是说考生需要找不同方面的内容填塞到对比论证中。
以上就是雅思写作空洞问题怎么破?增加论证是关键的全部内容，小编认为，光是从语言的角度去增加论证解释比较难，如果没有平时的思考积累和一定的逻辑思维能力，雅思写作写出来的内容多半是纸上谈兵，让人看了之后没有任何印象。因此，除了平时多记一些可用的例子外，多看一些外文报纸了解世界正在发生的事也很重要。
雅思写作中的11种连接词总结
雅思写作中的11种连接词总结为大家带来在雅思写作中，可以表示句子内部、句子间乃至段与段之间关系的连接词汇总。雅思写作非常讲究行文的逻辑性，这也是雅思写作评分标准当中的一个重要评分要素。无论是雅思小作文还是雅思大作文，清晰的逻辑都能让评卷人一目了然。而这些连接词能增加行文的逻辑性。
一、And 并列关系
(and)in addition/and/similarly/likewise/as well as/besides/furthermore/also/moreover/too/not only ... but/even/besides this/that
二、Sequence 顺序 (then)
出现的时候表示列举
first/initially/second etc./to begin with/then/next/earlier/later/following this/that/afterwards
三、Consequence 结果 (so)
前面是后面的结果/也就是这些词后面就开始给出结论了
as a result/thus/so/therefore/consequently/it follows that/thereby/eventually/in that case/admittedly
四、Contrast 转折 (but )
表对前面论述的转折/一般后面才是作者观点
however/on the other hand/despite/in spite of/though/although/but/on the contrary/otherwise/yet/instead of/rather/whereas/nonetheless/in contrast
1. for one thing, for another, above all things;
2. to begin/start with, next/besides/moreover, last/finally;
3. in the first place, in the second, in the third, (and) best of/worst of all; 4. one of these, another,(there is) still another(reason/factor);
1. 首先;其次;重要的是;
2. 首先;然后/此外/而且;后;
3. ，首先;第二;第三;好的是/糟糕的是;
4. 其中一个;另一个;还有一个(原因/因素);
五、Certainty 确定 (of course)
强烈的确定/后面是作者的坚定论点
obviously/certainly/plainly/of course/undoubtedly
六、Condition 条件/ 因为 (if )
后面跟随着某种情况发生的前提或者是条件。
if/unless/whether/provided that/Given that /for/so that/whether/depending on
七、Time 时间 (when)
before/since/as/until/meanwhile/at the moment/when/whenever/as soon as/just as
八、Summary 总结 (in a word)
作者的最后总结
in conclusion/in summary/lastly/finally/to sum up/to conclude/to recapitulate 重述/in short/in a word
九、Example 举例 (for example)
for example/for instance/just as/in particular/such as/namely 也就是
十、Reason 原因 (because)
since/as/so/because (of)/due to/owing to/the reason why/in other words/leads to/cause
十一、表对比(comparison)
1. but, but on the contrary, but on the other hand, but then;
2. by contrast, in contrast, in contrast with/to, as a contrast to, as opposed to;
3. by contraries, on the contrary, to the contrary, contrary to (A), opposite to, in opposition to;
4. whereas, while, while on the other hand, while on the whole, yet, however;
5. (as) compared with/to, by comparison, in comparison with, by comparison to
6. First..., Next..., Last...;
7. In the first / early / initial / infant period / stage / phase(或In its infancy)..., In the second / middle / adult / ripe period / stage / phase..., In the third / last / closing / later / concluding period...;
8. One step (way/course/approach/secret/trick)..., Another step..., Still another step...;
9. The first measure/step/move..., Next to it comes..., And the last/final/the most important measure...;
10. The direct experience/lesson/factor/way(或One lesson)... The indirect experience/lesson/factor/way(或The other lesson)...
雅思写作连接词之对比转折词语句型介绍：
1. 但是;但相反地;但另一方面;但是接下去;
2. 通过对比;经过对比;经与…对比;作为与…的对比;作为…的对照;
3. 相反;相反;相反;与A相反;与…相反;与…相反;
4. 然而;然而;然而另一方面;然而整体而言;然而;然而;
5. 跟…相比
6. 首先…;其次…;后…;
7. 在个/早期/开始/婴儿时期/阶段;在第二个/中间/成人/成熟时期/阶段;在第三个/后/结束/后面的阶段;
8. 一个措施/方法/做法/秘密/计策是…;另一个措施是…;还有一个措施是…;
9. 个措施是…;接着是…;后一个/重要的措施是…;
10. 直接经验/教训/因素/途径是(一个教训是)…;间接经验/教训/因素/途径是(另一个教训是)… 雅思写作对比转折句型
1. But the obvious (fatal/serious) flaw (defect/drawback) in their argument (attitude/idea/view/action/behavior) is that.../But the basic (main/great/key/ big) problem with their argument (...) is that...
e.g. ...that they are ignorant of (blind to) a bare fact: Social changes have attached new meanings and values to the division between good and bad.
2. But if...it is (not) easy (difficult/hard) to see (find/discover) that ... e.g. But if they adjust their frame of mind a little in the other direction , it is not hard for them to find that life is just as promising as before.
3. Too much emphasis (attention/stress/concern/significance) placed on (given to/focused on/attached to/paid to) the negative (sunny/gloomy/bright) side of the issue, however, may...(如mislead/confuse/cloud/bias/disturb our judgment of it.)A
e.g. ..., however, may mislead us to form a pessimistic estimate of current situations.或..., however, may stop us from rendering (passing/forming/having) a fair (correct/clear/infallible/wise) judgment on it.
4. But in most cases/from the point of view of justice (objectivity)/as a matter of fact/in a very true sense, their (public/general) satisfaction
(dissatisfaction/disillusionment/concern) with...(或their criticism of.../their argument for/against.../their objection to.../their approval for...)can not.../is..., for...
e.g. But in an impartial sense, the public dissatisfaction can not hold every water, for our society is still abundant in goodness and beauty.
5. As a result of..., however, things would/are bound to...
e.g. As a result of such an utter indifference to vicious behavior, however , things would be past saving/mending/all the hope.
雅思写作转折句型介绍：
1. 但他们辩论/态度/观点/看法/行为中的明显/致命的/严重的缺点/缺陷是…;他们辩论的基本/大/主要问题在于…
例：…他们忽视了一个赤裸裸的事实：社会变革给善恶的区分赋予了新的意义和价值。
2. 但如果…很(不)容易/难发现…
例：但如果他们稍微调整一下思路，就不难发现生活还是跟以前一样前途光明。
3. 然而，对问题负面/正面/阴暗面给予/集中/附加了太多的强调/注意/关注会…(如误导/混淆/掩盖/歪曲/干扰我们对它的判断)
例：然而，…会误导我们对目前的形势形成悲观的估计。或：然而，…会阻碍我们对其形成/有一个正确的/清楚的/无误的/明智的判断。
4. 但大多数情况下/从公正(客观)的角度来看/实际上/真正意义上，他们/公众/对…的满意/不满/幻灭/关注(或：他们对…的批评/他们对…辩解(辩驳)/他们对…的反对/他们对…的支持)不能…/是…，因为…
例：但从公正的角度来看，公众的不满并不都有道理，因为我们的社会仍然充满着善与美。
5. 然而，作为…的结果，事情会注定…
例：然而，作为对不良行为全然漠视的结果，事情将成为过去，希望还在。
以上就是雅思写作中的11种连接词总结的全部内容，建议大家在进行雅思的写作练习时有意督促自己去用这些连接词，因为文中举出的这11种表行文关系的词语基本能包含所有的行文关系，这不仅是对写作的一个提高，对于雅思的阅读，增加对这些词的熟悉度也相当于在增加定位技巧的速度。
掌握这些雅思写作经典句型，论证陈述不再是难题
为大家整理了35个雅思写作经典句型，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V
Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...)
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的...)
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的优点是...)
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won‘t create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此...以致于...)
例句：So precious is time that we can‘t afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...)
例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V~~~(愈...愈...)
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...，..能够..)
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (..使..能够..)
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...)
例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是...的时候了)
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~ (...的人...)
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不...)
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不...)
例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)
It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因)
例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don‘t like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来，...一直...)
例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。
例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中，他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。)
例句：It pays to help others.
帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on (以...为基础)
例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让...明白...事)
例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving = make it a rule to + V (养成...的习惯)
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~ (因为...)
例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不满意)
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~~ (对...有很大的影响)
例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to (对...有益)，do harm to (对...有害)
例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ (对...造成一大威胁)
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do one‘s utmost to + V = do one‘s best (尽全力去...)
例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
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